part time ghost

[u/Pound4PoundBestMemer]

She haunts this place

Her presence is felt more on the days she's absent

Her laugh takes up space that doesn't get filled in the noise of everyone else

The cigarette butt she leaves behind is the only proof she ever existed

Long after she's gone

People will still come here

But they'll know

Something is missing

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[u/IamToofan]

It's good but it feels like some more lines are needed in between.