r/OCPoetry • u/IamToofan • 1d ago

Just Sharing The Moon

After so many days, I finally saw the moon.
She doesn't know how beautiful she looks from here.
I can only gaze at her from afar
And whisper sweet words into the night,
knowing she will never hear them.
Because somehow, she makes my night feel less dark.

​When our eyes meet,
Time stands still,
And I get lost somewhere inside.

​'Moon' is just the name we gave her,
But what is her real name?
I want to know that,
But I cannot go there—
Because she is the moon.

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u/Foreign_Degree160 13h ago

This is so beautiful, I’ve been trying to write a poem about the moon for a while but I think you found the perfect words. I think your formatting is good and I like how you broke up your stanzas

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u/IamToofan 13h ago

Thanks