r/ProduceMyScript • u/Responsible-Ad-6114 • 5d ago

SHORT SCRIPT COLLATERAL DAMAGE — 10-Page Crime Comedy Pilot

Pilot (10 Pages)

Genre: Comedy / Crime

Tone: Breaking Bad meets Workaholics

Logline: "When two paranoid suburban burnouts lose their grandmother's ashes to a local pawn shop, they treat minor neighborhood beefs like a military black-op—while dodging an extortionist bulldog."

Synopsis: Set against a gritty, sun-bleached backdrop, two deadpan suburban cousins embark on a frantic, absurd series of misadventures to buy back their family's ceramic urn before it hits the open market shelf.

Read Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nVHaXMzj-PbsJ8gQ_eniF4id2IEnNIC1/view?usp=sharing (Note: The full 30-page pilot script and series bible are also available upon request for anyone interested in a deeper read.)

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u/Responsible-Ad-6114 4d ago

MR. HENDERSON: Son, your shoulders are practically touching your ears, your posture looks like a question mark, and your safety is still flipped on.

EDDIE: That's called trigger discipline, you old buzzard! Shows what you know about tactical entry! We're professionals!

MR. HENDERSON: There's a whole ecosystem of rust growing down the barrel, Eddie.