r/SFM 1d ago

Artwork Tried

it looks bad

1.3k Upvotes

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u/Majestic-Lie86 1d ago

doktor hasn’t finished charging heavy

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u/MysticalFry 1d ago

id make it so medic is bent over a little more so the pull looks like its coming from lower and try to exaggerate the positioning like i did here (i made heavies legs much longer.)

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u/Wandering-the-web 1d ago

I agree

Also I would add the minigun in heavy’s off hand, like he’s squeezing it to calm down.

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u/t-h1rd3ye 1d ago edited 1d ago

How does it look? lmk

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u/MysticalFry 12h ago

this is better. but id do a bit more and maybe make his legs a bit shorter lol, i didnt mean to tell you to do that, just was an example on what you can do. and some advice, dont focus on making it look good from all angles, just focus on the cameras view to make it look good. even if it means it looks extra funky from a different angle.

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u/Wandering-the-web 12h ago

Yes, fills a lot of empty space and tells a story.

Kind of like the Viscous Cycle of Heavy

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u/dr_bobs 12h ago

The only problem with it is that it's the bottom that is being grabbed, which you had no choice over, other than that it's great.

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u/Responsible-Diet-147 23h ago

Couldn't have been better.

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u/Vina-Estrogen YouTube 1d ago

This is hilarious and I'll be using this

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u/t-h1rd3ye 1d ago

🫶🏽

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u/t-h1rd3ye 1d ago

use ths

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u/Vina-Estrogen YouTube 1d ago

Yooo, this is even sicker! Thx for sharing with me haha

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u/catobsession223 14h ago

...this can go multiple ways

Yet all im thinking is the gay ways

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u/Softwaregorehunter69 7h ago

And succeedeed

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u/GriddledDuck69 1d ago

Medic looks pretty good man maybe just adjust the heavy a bit more

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u/InkyGhoul 6h ago

I don't use sfm, in fact I only ever tried once, but you could maybe scrunch/shrink the coat down at the part where it's in heavy's hand to decrease the clipping.

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u/Awesomeman235ify 5h ago

I know it's his coat, but it looks like Heavy's giving him a wedgie.

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u/Chester-Berkeley 3h ago

It lacked impact, but it was a good try c: