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🖤 GOD OF MADNESS 🖤

My ghosts were back.

They had crawled out from the hidden corners of my mind, rising to the surface just to mock me.

This time, they didn't come only to whisper.

They came with a promise.

A promise to take me with them.

To break me piece by piece.

Second by second.

It was their revenge.

For hurting Mia.

The perfect twin.

The perfect Sokolov.

And this time, I was completely alone.

Too weak.

Too pathetic.

Too broken to even protect myself.

And the truth was?

I didn't want to fight anymore.

I was exhausted.

Exhausted from being a disappointment.

A useless mafia princess.

A backstabber.

So, I stopped fighting.

I let myself sink into that suffocating black ocean and allowed the darkness to pull me deeper. I welcomed the numbness.

Until—

His hands stopped them.

A warm, familiar touch cut through the freezing darkness.

And then I heard his voice.

Ilya Levitsky.

He was calling me back.

Commanding me to fight.

But how do you fight when your soul is already gone?

How do you come back when you're simply too tired to survive the darkness?

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🖤 A GOD OF RUIN FANFICTION 🖤

Maya Sokolov × Ilya Levitsky

A story about darkness, guilt, secrets, broken souls, and the person who might be willing to reach into the madness and pull you back—

even when you don't believe you're worth saving.

Welcome to the madness.

Welcome to GOD OF MADNESS.