I’ve been thinking about why I miss books written in third person, and I think it comes down to one specific thing: first person hides a lot of structural cheating that third person would expose.
A ton of fantasy romance uses ancient immortal beings 🧛🧜♂️🧚 as a character trait without it actually functioning as one.
Tamlin in ACOTAR is supposed to be centuries old, but nothing about how he argues, gets jealous, or makes decisions reads as someone who’s lived that long - he reacts like a modern guy with control and anger issues.
At this point I am begging you for no spoilers as I am a baby in ACOTAR fandom, I am nearly done with the first book and the plan is to finish all 16 by release of the new two - wish me luck 😅
But it’s the same deal in a lot of fae romance generally: the immortality is a label, not something baked into how the character actually thinks.
Compare that to something like Tolkien’s elves, where being immortal produces an actual specific texture and flavour- a kind of grief from watching everything around you die while you don’t. Or Pratchett’s Death, who reasons in a genuinely non-human way.
In those cases, not human changes the character’s logic. In a lot of romantasy, if you crossed out immortal fae and just made the guy a rich, emotionally unavailable mortal, nothing about the story would need to change 😭
And I think first person is part of why this goes unnoticed. You’re locked inside the narrator’s head, so you never get the outside view that would make the inconsistency obvious. You just experience him as devastatingly attractive and powerful because that’s how she experiences him - you don’t get the distance to go wait, does this guy actually think like something that’s lived 500 years, or does he just have a cool backstory?
Third person would give more room for that kind of gap to actually be visible - you’d see the character from outside the narrator’s crush-goggles, and the writing would have to hold up on its own instead of being propped up by trust me, sis, he’s ancient and mysterious and outrageously irresistible.
Anyone else find themselves missing third person for this reason, or is it just me?