Srry the text is in the french

It would be really kind if someone would like to make some crits on the composition or the drawings

(Srry for my awful english)

I’ve been developing a new all-ages comic called Gurt the Valkyrie. Its about a Valkyrie that comes to Midgard to experience life in the human world, and ends up trying to navigate high school in New Jersey while she battles frost giants and mythical creatures. This cover was drawn in pencil and then colored with procreate. I’m testing a compact black-and-white format for the interior pages. Tell me what you think, thanks for looking.

I am by no means a good artist, but I was hoping you guys could fill out my survey for my media project :) we have to get audience feedback, and for this particular survey i'm focussing on composition. But in future will be asking for other critiques so look out for it! I would appreciate any kind of tips for anything as well.

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSeFvjagDob5NrOK-YnXJjA-qeZAPZ-ks5UMaHchVCq9pI30Vg/viewform?usp=dialog

I would just like to preface by saying I am a year 12 media student with no experience in art except for very rare bursts of drawing with no guidance. I have recieved a few mean responses about my art skills, so I would like to ask you to please be factual and gentle with me. This specific survey focuses on composition and panel flow, I have specifically chosen a few pages with these aspects slightly differing to judge, this is so you judge without being impacted by the story.

This character is named Tikhon—a Russian name, given that the story initially unfolds in Russia. Since childhood, he has been subjected to experimental serums that granted him incredible strength but also resulted in extremely low intelligence. The comic tells the story of a group of people who escape from a shelter and encounter a dangerous outside world.

Snippet from my Ai comic Manifest. I know that’s a dealbreaker for some people, but I’m mainly looking for feedback on the comic itself.

This is my first real action sequence, so I’m mostly curious how it reads. Does the buildup work? Is the action easy to follow?

Also open to feedback on the panel flow, framing, poses, SFX, pacing, or anything that feels confusing or could be made more dynamic. All feedback is welcome! Positive or negative :)