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u/just_an_espresso_guy 2d ago
I love what you have done with the contrast, it looks much better. Personally, I don't think the subject is very interesting but thats just my take
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u/johngpt5 2d ago
Your edit has shaped light to draw attention to that Orwellian structure. It's like a futuristic version of a medieval castle's turret.
Cropping has really made that turret even more attention grabbing.
Correcting the original image's color cast has also made the Orwellian turret stand out.
I wonder if it would be possible to lean into the Orwellian feel by allowing some of that color cast to return to the crowd? I wonder if returning some of that red to areas outside of that turret might make for a more ominous feel?
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u/pfc_bgd 2d ago
Increased contrast leads the eye to that area right of the center and that concrete thing- but there’s nothing to see really. Meh.
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u/ModernAnalog 2d ago
I might have phrased it differently, but the edit draws attention to something that’s not very compelling.
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u/Calm_Illustrator8622 2d ago
you should add little stuff like “Meh.” to every critique you write. makes you really likable 👍


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u/Perri1606 2d ago
I really like how you rebalanced the light/shadows and the clarity you added!