Here cause [r/sci-fi](r/sci-fi) wonāt accept me.
If the age demographic is anything above 10 years old Iām going crash out. Truly such an INSUFFERABLE main character, he continues to confirm to me that 1st POV books are commonly not good for me personally with a few exceptions Ofcrs. I canāt wait to finish this stupid book. The ājokesā are placed to get a laugh but thereās no one laughing. The scientific explanations can be nice until he brags about being smart.
The main character speaks like a middle schooler not like a middle school teacher. I gel as if he lacks the professionalism required for such an intense dire situation. I canāt with the humour at all (I need to see if humour works in sci-fi, post your suggestions down below). It feels immature and irrelevant to the story.
Here are some of the quotes Iāve found that have irked the shit out of me. The first on is very much up there.
Time for me to use science. All right, genius brain: come up with something!
ā¦Iām hungry.
You have failed me, brain.
āaaaand theyāre dead. - I cannot with the elongated a, I get were reading it as if weāre in his mind but it gets to a point.
And if I was in a coma, why do I even have muscles? I should be a withered, spindly mess right now, not beach-bod buff. - I feel like this could have been described better.
āTheyāre wrong!ā I crossed my arms. āThereās nothing magical about hydrogen and oxygen! Theyāre required for Earth life, sure. But another planet could have completely different conditions. All life needs is a chemical reaction that results in copies of the original catalyst. And you donāt need water for that!ā - like I get it itās his character but I feel like thereās somethingā¦maybe itās the way I read it with the exclamation marks and everything.
I leaned to Dimitri. āAre all Russians crazy?ā
āYes,ā he said with a smile. āIt is the only way to be Russian and happy at the same time.ā - isnāt this racist?
But I have to save humanity first. Stupid humanity. Getting in the way of my hobbies. - I feel like this was meant to be a joke and it did not land.
I put my hand to my chest in mock surprise. āGoodness me! DuBois appears to be black! Iām surprised you allowed it! Arenāt you afraid heāll ruin the mission with talk of rap music and basketball?ā - I get it but it was unnecessary to go in detail with the racial stereotype you could have stopped at āIām suprised you allowed it!ā And if you wanted to add on it could have been like āwhat about all the shortcomings because of his race?ā Or something idk
āYouāve been a bad alien cylinder,ā I say to it. āYou need a time-out.ā - PLEASE NO I CANNOT WITH THIS āJOKEā IT IS NLT FUNNY