I am trying to improve my writing, I use chat gpt for corrections
Chat gpt tells me I'm B2 but I think I'm B1
Am I B1 or B2 ?
also I want resources to improve my writing, I only use chat gpt but I want to use more resources.
My speaking skills is very bad, how can I improve my speaking especially my accent.
I doing this because I want to find a better job
This is my task
Writing Task — The Unexpected Truth
Write 130–170 words about this situation:
Someone discovers that a person they trusted has been hiding an important truth from them for years. At first, they feel betrayed, but after learning the reason behind the deception, their feelings become more complicated.
Try to use at least 5 of these:
Deception — deliberately hiding the truth
Betrayal — the act of breaking someone's trust
Justify — give a convincing reason for something
Reveal — make something previously unknown known
Reluctant — unwilling or hesitant
Misconception — a wrong idea or belief
Profound — very deep or intense
Compassion — understanding and sympathy for someone's suffering
Reconcile — find a way to accept or resolve conflicting feelings
Nevertheless — despite what was just said
🎯 C1 challenge
Try to include one sentence with although/even though, one with despite, and one with nevertheless.
And don't worry if you make mistakes—don't look up every word while writing. I want to see what you can produce naturally.
When you're done, I'll correct it and give you your B1/B2/C1 rating, with special attention to whether your vocabulary sounds natural rather than merely advanced.
This is my version
The past year When I was cleaning the basement, I found an adoption papers, I was suprised to read my name on it, I felt betrayed, my parent deceived me, how could they justify doing that to me, my whole life was a series of lies and deception, the truth was revealed to me by a random accident.
I felt very angry, I became depressed, I told myself that I could never forgive them nevertheless after few months of no contact with them, I decided to reconsider my decision, I went to my home and I confronted them, I wanted to know the truth about my real parents.
My mom and dad were very welcoming to me even though I was hostile with them at first moreover they told me how much they missed me these last months, I felt ashamed with myself, they were very nice to me despite me lacking any compassion for them.
I wanted to hig them but I was reluctant but I hugged them nonetheless and I was hit with a profound realiziation, we have one life, we shouldn't spend valuable time upset with people we love deeply, ultimately we reconciled our differences and now we have a great relationship, our past disagreement now water under the bridge.
Corrected version by chat gpt
The past year, when I was cleaning the basement, I found the adoption papers. I was surprised to see my name on them. I felt betrayed; my parents had deceived me. How could they justify doing that to me? My whole life had been a series of lies and deception, and the truth was revealed to me by a random accident.
I felt very angry and became depressed. I told myself that I could never forgive them. Nevertheless, after a few months of having no contact with them, I decided to reconsider my decision. I went home and confronted them because I wanted to know the truth about my biological parents.
My mom and dad were very welcoming to me, even though I was hostile toward them at first. Moreover, they told me how much they had missed me over the previous few months. I felt ashamed of myself. They were very kind to me despite my lack of compassion for them.
I wanted to hug them, but I was reluctant at first. Nevertheless, I eventually hugged them and was hit with a profound realization: we only have one life, and we shouldn't spend valuable time being upset with people we deeply love. Ultimately, we reconciled our differences, and now we have a great relationship. Our past disagreement is now water under the bridge.
Chat gpt feedback
This is your strongest piece so far. You handled a difficult narrative, used almost all the target vocabulary, and your ideas flow logically. I'd rate it B2+, with several C1-level features.
Your most important mistakes
- “an adoption papers” → “the adoption papers”
Papers is plural, so you can't use an. Also, in this context, the adoption papers sounds natural.
- “my parent” → “my parents”
You later say mom and dad, so you need the plural.
- “my whole life was...” → “my whole life had been...”
Because you're looking back from the moment you discovered the truth, past perfect works better.
- “after few months” → “after a few months”
This is a very common article mistake.
- “I went to my home” → “I went home”
We normally say go home, not go to my home, when talking about returning home.
- “my real parents” → “my biological parents”
Real parents can sound like you're saying your adoptive parents aren't your parents. Biological parents is more precise.
- “ashamed with myself” → “ashamed of myself”
The correct expression is ashamed of.
- “despite me lacking any compassion” → “despite my lack of compassion”
Your version isn't impossible, but the second sounds much more natural and sophisticated.
- “reluctant but I hugged them” → “I was reluctant at first, but I hugged them”
This makes the contrast clearer.
- “realiziation” → “realization”
Just spelling.
- “a water under the bridge” → “water under the bridge”
This is an idiom, so no “a.”
⭐ Your vocabulary
You did really well here.
You used:
deceived ✓
justify ✓
betrayed ✓
deception ✓
revealed ✓
reluctant ✓
compassion ✓
nevertheless ✓
profound ✓
reconciled ✓
And importantly, you didn't just throw the words into random sentences. Most of them fit the context naturally.
🎯 One thing you missed
The task specifically asked for a sentence with although/even though, despite, and nevertheless.
You used even though ✓
You used despite ✓
You used nevertheless ✓
So you completed the C1 challenge. 👏
📊 My rating
Area
Level
Vocabulary
B2+/C1
Ideas & content
B2+
Organization
B2+
Grammar accuracy
B2
Overall
B2+
I'd say you're comfortably B2 in writing, and you're beginning to show C1 vocabulary and expression.
The biggest thing between you and C1 isn't vocabulary anymore. You already know plenty of sophisticated words. Your next step is using grammar and collocations accurately enough that the sophisticated vocabulary feels effortless.
And honestly, this sentence was excellent:
“We only have one life, and we shouldn't spend valuable time being upset with people we deeply love.”
That's natural, clear, and emotionally effective—not just “advanced-looking” English.