r/Maasverse • u/Kitchen-Clock-3821 • 19h ago
Throne of Glass Thank god someone saw the potential cuz I wouldn’t have
Before you cancel me, let me just say this might trigger people so please don't read further cuz i don't like to read rude comments. This is just me putting forth my opinion and checking if someone else agrees.
I'm a first time reader, almost done with Throne of Glass as the first book and I read this line in Dorian's POV and I'm like... dude there was literally no build up. I've read the rest of Maas-verse and I gotta say that even though I'm not a fan of some of the ships, they at least had a build up and genuine chemistry. Maybe it's cuz Tog was Sarah's first ever book series and she was basically a teenager when she wrote it, but tbe writing is just pissing me off.
It's all tell, and no show. At all!
Oh Celeana is the most powerful assasin ever (we can't go two lines without being reminded of that)
Oh Dorian and Choal are into her cuz she used to be of "former beauty"
Oh now Dorian is suddenly in LOVE with her after only like... 14 days?! I'm sorry but making him be all head over heels for her all of a sudden was just so unexpected. I expected a little bit-- at least a little bit, of more build up or literally some time to let thier relationship grow. They kissed twice. Danced once. And boom. "SHE'S THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE"
It's droning.
But those things can be overlooked cuz I've been told the story gets better and that there's a character called Manon that I-- and I quote this from multiple people-- "HAVE to meet".
So yeah I'll be reading more.
This is not really meant as a hate post cuz I knew a few spoilers even before I picked up the book because it's such a popular series and I'm into it.
All I'm saying that is that the reason I picked up this series was cuz of the hype and popularity-- which I'm not saying is wrong; I haven't read the series fully yet to conclude that-- but if it wasn't so talked about and popular I don't think many of the readers would have been a fan of the writing and the author voice in general. But maybe that's cuz TOG isn't supposed to be a romantic story. Still. I made another post earlier about the writing being... bad for the lack of another word, and many people agreed.
All I'm asking from all you readers is does it get better? I am going to finish the series cuz I'm intrigued by the story line and I wanna meet this Manon girl (also Dorian is cute) and yeah I like epic fantasy and world building. I'm just hoping it will be worth it
Ps- let me say it again, I'm not hating, just putting out an opinion open for HEALTHY discussion, so if this triggers you, i apologise. It wasn't my intention to offend. Seriously there are a lot of people on reddit who get defensive and angry for the smallest of things