the regency motel (23pgs, comedy, pilot)

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Logline: A humble motel owner's world that contains a spirit from another dimension, a maybe-pimp, and a silent sweet old grandma, is rocked when a mysterious drifter books a room in his motel, bringing chaos but also happiness into the mix.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1sAwhTXBD4mmNZYUF77ZqsAPw8_PeLu5l/view?usp=sharing

I wrote this as a pilot but I think it's also self-contained enough to work as a short. Let me know what y'all think. Whether you like it or don't like it or maybe something in between. Thank you.

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