r/WriteWithMe • u/Kind-Response9304 • 1h ago
Seeking a Story-Development Partner for an Anime-Inspired Sci-Fi Webcomic
I’m developing an original action/science-fantasy webcomic called Dominion: Blood & Honor. It takes place in New Chicago in 2078 and combines futuristic warfare, powerful rings, family legacies, rival factions, martial arts, sword combat, and anime-style storytelling.
I already have the main characters, powers, locations, history, visual designs, and many major scenes created. I’m looking for a consistent critique partner who can help me:
- Organize the complete storyline and timeline
- Divide the story into seasons and episodes
- Strengthen character arcs and motivations
- Catch contradictions and plot holes
- Improve pacing, twists, emotional moments, and worldbuilding
- Help me decide what information should be revealed and when
I’m not currently offering payment and I’m not asking anyone to create the entire story for me. I’m looking for a free, reciprocal partnership where we can exchange feedback and help develop each other’s projects.
I’m the original creator and owner of Dominion: Blood & Honor. We would begin by exchanging short summaries and discussing our creative styles before sharing larger documents.
If you enjoy action anime, science fiction, fantasy, comics, worldbuilding, or character-driven stories, please comment or message me with what you’re working on and what areas of storytelling you’re strongest in.