*Updating as I read ✌️😬 I am getting super hooked now and have so many thoughts and things to get excited about. I need to let them out somewhere 😆 Would normally go to the comments on the RR chapter but all those chapters were taken down 😅 Is it annoying to make these type of posts for every PM book? 😅
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Handling
What am I, a goalkeeper? Next!
Jumping
What am I, a flea? Next!
This was so funny 🤣 Because it came right after several long paragraphs of Max analysing his football attributes. The sense of comedic timing here haha
But teamwork, bro. You’re all about teamwork. You had a whole arc where you ruined your career for the sake of teamwork.
Again! Max poking fun of himself for rating his Teamwork as 1 is just so funny. The sense of humour, you have to read it in context 😂
No, wait, is it me or is the prose getting really good? 🤔 The wittiness of it all just makes me smile.
His hair had started to recede, but at some point it had screamed “No surrender!” and where it remained, it was magnificent.
No, seriously, some of these sentences are legit pretty funny. I just keep picturing Max putting on his serious face to make things happen but these stuff are running through his head internally 😂
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Edit 1:
Trial match at Chester and wait a sec, wait just a minute. Player Manager means being both a player AND the manager? Is that what the story is going for?? I thought it meant managing the players like he did with Beth Heads. The two old retirees mentioned just one other player-manager who both played and managed. I didn’t know that existed and now I’m not sure how I feel about it. The game feels a bit dull at the moment. I was looking forward to that soulmate telepathy thing with Raffi and it’s not happening.
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Edit 2:
The Ian trial is over and Max meeting up with Ziggy kinda showed me something curious and interesting about Max or maybe how the author is writing it? When he’s mad at someone or scheming something in football, there are a lot of words to be read. But whenever he does something heartwarming, he just does it, zero thoughts to telegraph it.
Like the hugs or giving that gambling ticket stub to Ziggy. So much thought in the writing. It shows when he’s present, he’s really present and does stuff. I can’t help thinking of Ziggy’s pov and feeling all touched lol. That was just ngaww.
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Edit 3:
Man, that whole negotiation with Ian, woof that was intense. It also like made Ian far more real?? I guess genuine conflict does that. It gives more shape into a blurry figure and makes it more solid. This is rather fascinating. Ian isn’t just a random character anymore but someone pretty defined by what values he stuck to against Max.
Also, this little snippet after the Browns received some good news:
Shona leapt for joy—a star jump—silently. Raffi got up, punched the air a few times, and let out a zero-decibel roar.
Just made me smile so widely. The writing for that just paints such a cute picture, star jump-silently and a zero-decibel roar arghhh Dang it such combination of words, especially because they are adults who even have a kid, just make me shake my fist to the sky from the overwhelming cuteness gah
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Edit 4:
Hmmm, there is a lot of Max being this crazy football prodigy and I’m not sure how I feel about it now. I thought the progression in this was to be the manager/coach/general of a team during games. The crazy good things he can do is due to the curse right? It feels quite unearned to be getting so much gushing from other football experts. Hurmmm.
Edit 5:
Haven’t read much yet but I keep wondering about the curse. Is the curse a normal thing upper tier managers have? Suddenly, Max is commenting on a lot of incongruities in his memories about how some managers in big teams seem to foretell stuff. And then that Max seems to have forgotten things? Like Jackie saying Max was the one who said something when in Max’s memories, Jackie was the one who told him. And that Champion Fantasy game. You would think as a football fanatic, the name of this apparently famous football video game would be known to Max. His mum also saying he played that a lot in his room before but he doesn’t remember. And all that comments about stuff he found online researching the curse in Book 1 making the text swim and gives him a headache. That incident was suspiciously rushed off by him and never mentioned again. I thought he would give it another try after the headache settles. Another clash was when Jackie was describing how Max budged into his training at the FC during Ziggy’s trial. He said a lot of things that Max didn’t mention in his own description of the event. Even words emMax seemingly did not say. It’s not even exaggeration, but opposite of what Max was feeling at the time. So I am getting very strong unreliable narrator vibes now. Is the curse all in his head?? Not real? Does Max have bipolar disorder? Does he have a legit mental disorder? Does this get address later in the story? Is this a serious magical realism story or litrpg where the system/curse is just an excuse to make a progression story???