r/zombies • u/Andrei22125 • 3h ago
discussion How would you rewrite the Battle of Yonkers? (So the failure makes sense)
Ok, so WWZ. The book written by Max Brooks. Slow shamblers. Undead. Bodily fluids transmission only. The zombies' blood is too congealed to bleed.
The point was as much to broadcast a clean win to the public as it was to kill zombies. They ended up broadcasting a catastrophic loss.
Max brooks had the zombies coming out of new York walk through artillery and gunship fire. Thermobaric munitions included.
The military was on the ground, in trenches they had just dug, in full chemical gear, on a notably hot summer.
Everyone I have ever seen talking about that scene says it makes no sense, and that Mark Hamil's voice does the heavy lifting.
How would you write it to get the same result? The point is that the US military has to lose in a way that achieve the exact opposite of the win they needed for propaganda?
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